What do you thing about this?

If you find any errors please tell me, because I know they are there somewhere.
Also what do you think about this? Is it could or should something be changed up? I want people to be directed to my other stories, but first I need one to make it in a contest so people try the others.

What the heck!! How is it 2 am already?! I checked like 5 minutes ago and it was 12!! Why does this always happen to me?! Ugh!!
Despite what I said, I stayed up another half hour on the computer and another half hour after that trying to go to sleep.
I don't know, maybe it was the food I ate at dinner, but I couldn't get to sleep. I just felt... sick and I almost couldn't stand the yucky feeling.

"Ahhhh!" I woke up from a horrible nightmare. I guess that's what you would call it... not a dream, yet not too much of a fright. I look at my alarm to see it blinking. Great... the stupid power went out.
"Heyo? Anybody home?" I went searching around the house to see if anyone was home. They must've gone to work. My mom and dad should learn to leave a note. I found my watch which read 7:30. Well, we have a 2 hour delay anyway so no big deal.
I went ahead and started getting ready. That annoying pain struck me in the stomach again. Oh come on, I don't need to be feeling this right now. The food I ate last night must've been out of date or something.

I rushed down the stairs through the chilling cold to get to my car. This mid-Feburary weather is annoying as he-... Hm? Mom and dad's car... is still in the lot. Why is that? Did it break down? If it did they would at least leave a note about that... maybe a co-worker came to pick them up?
The feeling just keeps coming back, and it's getting worse. Ugh... maybe I should just stay home, but I have to turn in this stupid paper for English, I've delayed it long enough.

No one is on the road... What's with this day? The power going out is normal. My parents not leaving a note fine. The road being empty...not a single car... it's just not possible!! What the heck is going on today?! Is it like an apocalypse or something?!
I immediately regret my choice of words. Nothing could be worse than what's going on right now.

For me personally if a story says something like "Oh crud!" I automatically won't read it lol. Something like "Oh shit!" Would sound better & more realistic to meee

Well, sorry. That's the one think I can rephrase, but I can't change it to that.
It's the law of me where I won't curse. ^_^'' ♠ Lame, I know.

So I just altered it a bit..., but it still isn't good enough is it?

It's fine haha.
But is hell a swear word?

nicee

I like it!

Yeah... I am very strict about the rules.

Danke!!♠
I am trying to come up with something so it wins so I can get my others stories read. More people will hopefully start reading my story Vanished Will.